Idea 1
- Curtis draws a knife out ready to attack Jerry.
- Curtis then walks into the room where Jerry is. Curtis finds Jerry's body laying on the floor, already dead.
- In the shock of finding the body, the limping character drops the knife onto the floor
Idea 2
- Jerry picks up a letter and opens it with a knife.
- Jerry read the letter with the audience able to see what is written on it. There is a court date written on the letter.
- Curtis walks into the flat, and picks up the knife that is on the side, the knife that Jerry used to open the letter with.
- Curtis then walks into the room where Jerry is. Curtis finds Jerry's body laying on the oor, already dead.
Make sure you explain why you've dropped earlier narrative ideas.
ReplyDeletePost final narrative idea onto your blog explaining why this narrative structure works and why it was easier to shoot. Head up "Final Narrative Idea".